Wednesday, June 13, 2012
Team Work
We have been learning about how the past changes the future. We learnt that by Reducing, Reuseing and Recycling we can change the furture and it will make the future a better place.
Friday, May 25, 2012
Cleanliness
Title: Cleanliness
13 Year old Girl named Lucy- Cheeky, Untidy, Lazy and she can be Good when she wants to.
Mum- Angry
On one hot summery day, lazy Lucy was such a untidy teenager that if you ever walked into her room it will smell like a Cat had died in there and it would look like a jungle. Lucy’s mum becomes a Angry Mother when it comes up to Lucy not keeping her bedroom clean.
Each day mum would ask her to clean her bedroom but all that came out of Lucy’s mouth was “Yeah I’ll do it later.” One hour later Lucy’s mother got so furious and asked Lucy nice and calmly once again to please clean her bedroom. Half of Lucy’s clothes were hanging out of her bedroom door. There was no answer but then “NO NO NO, I’ll do it later I said” Mom screams out “When I come back from a nice refreshing walk it better be done immediately, do you understand me?” “Yeah okay then what ever” Lucy replied. While mom was on her walk she was thinking of a way to make Lucy feel like a real teenage girl and be a clean and a good girl.
Then finally Lucy felt guilty and did what she was asked to do, she did not want her mum to be more angry than how she was before she left the house. So even though Lucy was tired and did not feel like doing it she did it. Lucy got on with it and did it for her mum’s sake. Lucy felt like stopping but she wanted to get it over and done with. She saw mom through the front window and then leaped back onto her couch. Mum walked through the front door looking nice and calm, so she asked Lucy once more “Have you cleaned your room Lucy?” “All done” Lucy replied in sleepiness. Mom walked up stairs to Lucy’s room, It was all nice and clean, It was spotless. Mom walked down stairs and said to Lucy “See Lucy isn’t it nice to stay in a clean room?” “ Yeah but it was quite tiring cleaning,” Lucy said. So then starting from that day Lucy kept her room nice and in fact it was spotless especially because when she walked back up she forgot about her socks on the floor and slipped over it and went face to face on the floor. “Ouch my head hurts” Lucy said. That was when she had learnt her lesson, to keep her bedroom clean.
So mum was so happy and was in a very good mood after that. So then Lucy was confident that she was going to keep her room clean so that nothing bad would happen again like slipping over her own socks.
Author: Zheiyna
Characters
13 Year old Girl named Lucy- Cheeky, Untidy, Lazy and she can be Good when she wants to.
Mum- Angry
Setting
WHERE: Mt Wellington- At home.
WHEN: School holidays.
Plot
There lived a 13 year old girl named lucy who was a very Cheeky,Untidy and a lazy girl who wanted to be good when she felt like. Mum was a very Angry Mother when it came up to lucy being very untidy
Climax
Lucy felt guilty and didn't want her mum to become more angry so she did what she was asked to do and cleaned her bedroom even though she felt lazy and tired. She learnt to be clean right when she slipped over her pair of socks and went face to face on the floor.
Theme
The message of the story was to always keep your bedrooms clean and to keep everything nice and clean.(*CLEANLINESS*)
My Story.
WHERE: Mt Wellington- At home.
WHEN: School holidays.
Plot
There lived a 13 year old girl named lucy who was a very Cheeky,Untidy and a lazy girl who wanted to be good when she felt like. Mum was a very Angry Mother when it came up to lucy being very untidy
Climax
Lucy felt guilty and didn't want her mum to become more angry so she did what she was asked to do and cleaned her bedroom even though she felt lazy and tired. She learnt to be clean right when she slipped over her pair of socks and went face to face on the floor.
Theme
The message of the story was to always keep your bedrooms clean and to keep everything nice and clean.(*CLEANLINESS*)
My Story.
On one hot summery day, lazy Lucy was such a untidy teenager that if you ever walked into her room it will smell like a Cat had died in there and it would look like a jungle. Lucy’s mum becomes a Angry Mother when it comes up to Lucy not keeping her bedroom clean.
Each day mum would ask her to clean her bedroom but all that came out of Lucy’s mouth was “Yeah I’ll do it later.” One hour later Lucy’s mother got so furious and asked Lucy nice and calmly once again to please clean her bedroom. Half of Lucy’s clothes were hanging out of her bedroom door. There was no answer but then “NO NO NO, I’ll do it later I said” Mom screams out “When I come back from a nice refreshing walk it better be done immediately, do you understand me?” “Yeah okay then what ever” Lucy replied. While mom was on her walk she was thinking of a way to make Lucy feel like a real teenage girl and be a clean and a good girl.
Then finally Lucy felt guilty and did what she was asked to do, she did not want her mum to be more angry than how she was before she left the house. So even though Lucy was tired and did not feel like doing it she did it. Lucy got on with it and did it for her mum’s sake. Lucy felt like stopping but she wanted to get it over and done with. She saw mom through the front window and then leaped back onto her couch. Mum walked through the front door looking nice and calm, so she asked Lucy once more “Have you cleaned your room Lucy?” “All done” Lucy replied in sleepiness. Mom walked up stairs to Lucy’s room, It was all nice and clean, It was spotless. Mom walked down stairs and said to Lucy “See Lucy isn’t it nice to stay in a clean room?” “ Yeah but it was quite tiring cleaning,” Lucy said. So then starting from that day Lucy kept her room nice and in fact it was spotless especially because when she walked back up she forgot about her socks on the floor and slipped over it and went face to face on the floor. “Ouch my head hurts” Lucy said. That was when she had learnt her lesson, to keep her bedroom clean.
So mum was so happy and was in a very good mood after that. So then Lucy was confident that she was going to keep her room clean so that nothing bad would happen again like slipping over her own socks.
Tuesday, May 15, 2012
YAY its finally the school holidays, but it was the most sacred week because the first day of the school holidays was on GOOD FRIDAY.... The second day of the school holiday was on a lovely, sunny Saturday morning. It was the day before the most graceful day of the month, EASTER SUNDAY. It was Easter Sunday. While my two aunties and I were waiting for the mass to start, we knelt down on our knees and started praying gracefully.
Next it was Monday and it was the first day of our Two Weeks holiday, later on that Monday I said in happiness and confidence,"I am so happy that the school holidays had started."
It was Tuesday and I was already missing my friends,I was wishing that I had something to remind me of them. I was having an awesome day so far, I couldn’t wait until the next day, just to sit back and watch Disney channel.
YES it's Wednesday, It's time for me to sit back and watch my favourite channel Disney and also Nickelodeon.
NOOOO, it was Thursday and the first week of the school holidays was almost over, "Days go fast" I said, but it was alright because my auntie just told us that we were going to the movies for my brother Phoenix birthday, he was turning 14 years of age. I jumped for joy right after she told us. "now I wish days will go extremely fast to reach next week on Tuesday" I said said.
Yes its was Friday and we were all excited but especially my brother Phoenix. He couldn't wait until we were going to the movies.
"Come back daylight savings, and make our days shorter again" I said in disparate-ion, It was Saturday and my brother was thinking of a movie to watch, then out of nowhere came "TITANIC" Then the rest of us started debating about Battleship or Titanic, it was four against one.
But its was Sunday and we all woke up getting dressed for Church and the debate was still on, then my Auntie walked in and heard us then she said looking furious " It is up to your brother on what movie we were going to watch, after all it was his birthday" We all replied "Yeah true that" Then she said "If you want to watch Battleship you can watch it but if your brother wants to watch Titanic let him" We were all happy.
So it was a beautiful Monday morning, it was almost Tuesday the day to go the movies. "YAY" we said.
"Yes, its finally Tuesday" we said and we all jumped with excitement. We all had a nice and clean shower and we dressed up looking superb.We started walking down to G.I later on that day to catch a Train ride to Hoyts Cinema at Sylvia Park. So it had got to the point where we were being so impatient and we all ran like the wind up the staircase. But it was better then running up the escalators and tripping up every minute. So we had finally got up to the top with no broken ankles. After all of that it was MOVIE TIME.
(Sigh) I had wished that Wednesday had gone back to Tuesday when we were in the two separate cinema Titanic and BattleShip. But sadly it was Wednesday but it was alright because I was thankful to go to the Movies on Tuesday.
It was a lovely Thursday Morning and I couldn't wait until the school holidays were over, I just wanted to go back to school and see my friends again. "I can't wait to go back to school" I said to myself.
It was Friday and I was so happy, there were two more days to go then school will be back on ready for Term 2.
Its Saturday morning and I just woke up and the time was almost 10.00 AM because I stayed up until 11.00PM at night watching Victorious, iCarly and Big Time Rush. But I woke up from a very comfortable sleep.
"SUNDAY" I said in happiness, It was the last day of the school holiday and I was so happy. School was going to be the next day, but Sunday felt like a really small day. I couldn't wait until the next day because of school. I felt so bored and exhausted on Sunday but the thing was that the school holidays were finally going to be over,
I couldn't wait to see my friends the next day, but lastly I had a really cool and awesome holiday, and I wish to have another exciting holiday again.
Next it was Monday and it was the first day of our Two Weeks holiday, later on that Monday I said in happiness and confidence,"I am so happy that the school holidays had started."
It was Tuesday and I was already missing my friends,I was wishing that I had something to remind me of them. I was having an awesome day so far, I couldn’t wait until the next day, just to sit back and watch Disney channel.
YES it's Wednesday, It's time for me to sit back and watch my favourite channel Disney and also Nickelodeon.
NOOOO, it was Thursday and the first week of the school holidays was almost over, "Days go fast" I said, but it was alright because my auntie just told us that we were going to the movies for my brother Phoenix birthday, he was turning 14 years of age. I jumped for joy right after she told us. "now I wish days will go extremely fast to reach next week on Tuesday" I said said.
Yes its was Friday and we were all excited but especially my brother Phoenix. He couldn't wait until we were going to the movies.
"Come back daylight savings, and make our days shorter again" I said in disparate-ion, It was Saturday and my brother was thinking of a movie to watch, then out of nowhere came "TITANIC" Then the rest of us started debating about Battleship or Titanic, it was four against one.
But its was Sunday and we all woke up getting dressed for Church and the debate was still on, then my Auntie walked in and heard us then she said looking furious " It is up to your brother on what movie we were going to watch, after all it was his birthday" We all replied "Yeah true that" Then she said "If you want to watch Battleship you can watch it but if your brother wants to watch Titanic let him" We were all happy.
So it was a beautiful Monday morning, it was almost Tuesday the day to go the movies. "YAY" we said.
"Yes, its finally Tuesday" we said and we all jumped with excitement. We all had a nice and clean shower and we dressed up looking superb.We started walking down to G.I later on that day to catch a Train ride to Hoyts Cinema at Sylvia Park. So it had got to the point where we were being so impatient and we all ran like the wind up the staircase. But it was better then running up the escalators and tripping up every minute. So we had finally got up to the top with no broken ankles. After all of that it was MOVIE TIME.
(Sigh) I had wished that Wednesday had gone back to Tuesday when we were in the two separate cinema Titanic and BattleShip. But sadly it was Wednesday but it was alright because I was thankful to go to the Movies on Tuesday.
It was a lovely Thursday Morning and I couldn't wait until the school holidays were over, I just wanted to go back to school and see my friends again. "I can't wait to go back to school" I said to myself.
It was Friday and I was so happy, there were two more days to go then school will be back on ready for Term 2.
Its Saturday morning and I just woke up and the time was almost 10.00 AM because I stayed up until 11.00PM at night watching Victorious, iCarly and Big Time Rush. But I woke up from a very comfortable sleep.
"SUNDAY" I said in happiness, It was the last day of the school holiday and I was so happy. School was going to be the next day, but Sunday felt like a really small day. I couldn't wait until the next day because of school. I felt so bored and exhausted on Sunday but the thing was that the school holidays were finally going to be over,
I couldn't wait to see my friends the next day, but lastly I had a really cool and awesome holiday, and I wish to have another exciting holiday again.
My Goals for Term 2
My Goals for Term 2 is to:
My goal for reading is for me to get better at making Inferences.
My goal for maths is to understand Multiplication and to get better at it so it can lead me to a good future.
My Goal for Writing is to improve on my Tensing and my Grammar.
My last goal for term 2 is to ignore people who loaf around and keep working.
My first goal is to stay on task and also to stay focused on my work until it is finished.
I wish to achieve both my Goals at the end of Term 2.
My goal for reading is for me to get better at making Inferences.
My goal for maths is to understand Multiplication and to get better at it so it can lead me to a good future.
My Goal for Writing is to improve on my Tensing and my Grammar.
My last goal for term 2 is to ignore people who loaf around and keep working.
My first goal is to stay on task and also to stay focused on my work until it is finished.
I wish to achieve both my Goals at the end of Term 2.
Friday, February 24, 2012
Welcome to 2012!!!
Hey everybody I’m back at school, ready for a new year in 2012. I had an awesome holiday with my family.
I am in Room 6 again as a year 6 student with a really different teacher who is awesome and cool. I hope Room 6 gets lots of learning done this year, and I am looking forward to getting to know my new teacher
Mrs Moodley.
(*Bring it on 2012*)
I am in Room 6 again as a year 6 student with a really different teacher who is awesome and cool. I hope Room 6 gets lots of learning done this year, and I am looking forward to getting to know my new teacher
Mrs Moodley.
(*Bring it on 2012*)
Monday, September 26, 2011
You are Special...
Once upon a time, there lived a little boy named Punchinello. He was a little boy that was carved out of wood. He wasn’t the only little wemmick there were millions more, they were all carved out of wood and they were also carved by the same wemmick maker. Then he realised that they weren’t just the same because some were tall, some were not, some were smart, some were not, some wore hats and some didn't. Punchinello always got plain grey stickers stuck on him and one day people just put them on him just because he always did dumb stuff.
One day there was a girl named Lucia who didn't have any stars or plain grey stickers stuck on her. It was because when people ran up to her and put stars or plain grey dots on her it will just fall right off. It was so amazing that it wouldn't stick, Punchinello saw the stickers fall off and then he said to Lucia “How come they're not sticking?” Then she said “I go and see Eli everyday, I sit in his work shop and I watch him” Punchinello replied “What do you do for it to stop sticking though?” Lucia said “Go find out yourself and see Eli”. Punchinello said “Would he want to see me?”. Then he went home and arose the the next morning to have a talk with Eli.
When Punchinello arrived at Eli’s factory on the hill, Punchinello opened the door and walked in. Punchinello heard a strange sound say “Hello Punchinello” but it was Eli, Punchinello said “How do you know my name?” Eli said “I’m your maker that's how I know your name” then Eli stretched his hand out to pick Punchinello up and put him on his table, and Punchinello asked his question “How do you make stickers stop sticking on your body?” Eli replied “You have to believe in yourself and don’t think about what other people think of you”. Punchinello said “Why do you care about me?” Eli said “I care about you because I made you” then Punchinello walked out the door and went back home. The next day Punchinello awoke from his sleep and remembered what Eli said to him then he went outside and people ran up to him and tried to put stickers on him, but it will just keep falling off. Punchinello had a lovely life starting from that very first day they fell off. Punchinello lived happily ever after.
One day there was a girl named Lucia who didn't have any stars or plain grey stickers stuck on her. It was because when people ran up to her and put stars or plain grey dots on her it will just fall right off. It was so amazing that it wouldn't stick, Punchinello saw the stickers fall off and then he said to Lucia “How come they're not sticking?” Then she said “I go and see Eli everyday, I sit in his work shop and I watch him” Punchinello replied “What do you do for it to stop sticking though?” Lucia said “Go find out yourself and see Eli”. Punchinello said “Would he want to see me?”. Then he went home and arose the the next morning to have a talk with Eli.
When Punchinello arrived at Eli’s factory on the hill, Punchinello opened the door and walked in. Punchinello heard a strange sound say “Hello Punchinello” but it was Eli, Punchinello said “How do you know my name?” Eli said “I’m your maker that's how I know your name” then Eli stretched his hand out to pick Punchinello up and put him on his table, and Punchinello asked his question “How do you make stickers stop sticking on your body?” Eli replied “You have to believe in yourself and don’t think about what other people think of you”. Punchinello said “Why do you care about me?” Eli said “I care about you because I made you” then Punchinello walked out the door and went back home. The next day Punchinello awoke from his sleep and remembered what Eli said to him then he went outside and people ran up to him and tried to put stickers on him, but it will just keep falling off. Punchinello had a lovely life starting from that very first day they fell off. Punchinello lived happily ever after.
Friday, September 2, 2011
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