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Friday, March 14, 2014

My Formal Complaint

I am learning to recognize what Phrases are.
Underline 5 phrases in your complaint.
( I have went the whole mile and underlined most phrases that I have found )
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To whom this may concern,
I have written this letter to inform you about your school.  I am aware that there is a lot of bullying happening throughout the school,  I have attended this school for 3 years now and I am not happy that there is nothing being done about it. I have been mocked,  teased & physically hurt because of who I am, and what I look like.  
I am not happy that my so called class mates have only been great at making people feel down, and not so great about themselves. Instead of helping themselves and doing what’s actually best for them, or is it just that bullying is what its all about. I’m pretty sure its not,  but it’ll be great if something was done about it.  
So every now and then I always reflect back on my day I first started, I was told that this school was the best school out of all the others, and that was told by a teacher.  The thing that confuses me is that our school is meant to be a school of loving and caring people, because its a catholic school.  But that actually doesn’t change the thought of other students minds,  to most students it’s all about negative side to everything.  It’s also about doing what THEY want.  But I get that no one is perfect and that the world isn’t perfect, but that has got nothing to do with this.  So I just wish that in the future this school will improve, and become a better & safer place for everyone.


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