Friday, September 5, 2014

Expressive Writing

In this piece of expressive writing I am confident that I have achieved all these goals :
- To use punctuation correctly and continuously.
- To make sure my sentences make sense.
- And to use interesting vocabulary to make my writing interesting.

{ I have underlined my punctuation and I have bolded my interesting words. }

Chocolate is something I crave for at every moment of the day. Not because i'm hungry all the time, but because it's something I can never get sick of eating.

I do know that it could ruin my health system and give me diabetes. But that was ever how I use to see chocolate.  I understand now that the best thing for me to do is to cut down on eating chocolate, because in the future it'll probably come around and say I told you so and bite me in the back side.

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