Friday, May 25, 2012


Title: Cleanliness
Author: Zheiyna

13 Year old Girl named Lucy- Cheeky, Untidy, Lazy and she can be Good when she wants to.

Mum- Angry
 WHERE: Mt Wellington- At home.

WHEN: School holidays.


There lived a 13 year old girl named lucy who was a very Cheeky,Untidy and a lazy girl who wanted to be good when she felt like. Mum was a very Angry Mother when it came up to lucy being very untidy


Lucy felt guilty and didn't want her mum to become more angry so she did what she was asked to do and cleaned her bedroom even though she felt lazy and tired. She learnt to be clean right when she slipped over her pair of socks and went face to face on the floor.


The message of the story was to always keep your bedrooms clean and to keep everything nice and clean.(*CLEANLINESS*)

My Story.

On one hot summery day, lazy Lucy was such a untidy teenager that if you ever walked into her room it will smell like a Cat had died in there and it would look like a jungle. Lucy’s mum becomes a Angry Mother when it comes up to Lucy not keeping her bedroom clean.

Each day mum would ask her to clean her bedroom but all that came out of Lucy’s mouth was “Yeah I’ll do it later.” One hour later Lucy’s mother got so furious and asked Lucy nice and calmly once again to please clean her bedroom. Half of Lucy’s clothes were hanging out of her bedroom door. There was no answer but then “NO NO NO, I’ll do it later I said” Mom screams out “When I come back from a nice refreshing walk it better be done immediately, do you understand me?” “Yeah okay then what ever” Lucy replied. While mom was on her walk she was thinking of a way to make Lucy feel like a real teenage girl and be a clean and a good girl.

Then finally Lucy felt guilty and did what she was asked to do, she did not want her mum to be more angry than how she was before she left the house. So even though Lucy was tired and did not feel like doing it she did it. Lucy got on with it and did it for her mum’s sake. Lucy felt like stopping but she wanted to get it over and done with. She saw mom through the front window and then leaped back onto her couch. Mum walked through the front door looking nice and calm, so she asked Lucy once more “Have you cleaned your room Lucy?” “All done” Lucy replied in sleepiness. Mom walked up stairs to Lucy’s room, It was all nice and clean, It was spotless. Mom walked down stairs and said to Lucy “See Lucy isn’t it nice to stay in a clean room?” “ Yeah but it was quite tiring cleaning,” Lucy said. So then starting from that day Lucy kept her room nice and in fact it was spotless especially because when she walked back up she forgot about her socks on the floor and slipped over it and went face to face on the floor. “Ouch my head hurts” Lucy said. That was when she had learnt her lesson, to keep her bedroom clean.

So mum was so happy and was in a very good mood after that. So then Lucy was confident that she was going to keep her room clean so that nothing bad would happen again like slipping over her own socks.

Tuesday, May 15, 2012

YAY its finally the school holidays, but it was the most sacred week because the first day of the school holidays was on GOOD FRIDAY.... The second day of the school holiday was on a lovely, sunny Saturday morning. It was the day before the most graceful day of the month, EASTER SUNDAY. It was Easter Sunday. While my two aunties and I were waiting for the mass to start, we knelt down on our knees and started praying gracefully.

Next it was Monday and it was the first day of our Two Weeks holiday, later on that Monday I said in happiness and confidence,"I am so happy that the school holidays had started."

It was Tuesday and I was already missing my friends,I was wishing that I had something to remind me of them. I was having an awesome day so far, I couldn’t wait until the next day, just to sit back and watch Disney channel.

YES it's Wednesday, It's time for me to sit back and watch my favourite channel Disney and also Nickelodeon.

NOOOO, it was Thursday and the first week of the school holidays was almost over, "Days go fast" I said, but it was alright because my auntie just told us that we were going to the movies for my brother Phoenix birthday, he was turning 14 years of age. I jumped for joy right after she told us. "now I wish days will go extremely fast to reach next week on Tuesday" I said said.

Yes its was Friday and we were all excited but especially my brother Phoenix. He couldn't wait until we were going to the movies.

"Come back daylight savings, and make our days shorter again" I said in disparate-ion, It was Saturday and my brother was thinking of a movie to watch, then out of nowhere came "TITANIC" Then the rest of us started debating about Battleship or Titanic, it was four against one.

But its was Sunday and we all woke up getting dressed for Church and the debate was still on, then my Auntie walked in and heard us then she said looking furious " It is up to your brother on what movie we were going to watch, after all it was his birthday" We all replied "Yeah true that" Then she said "If you want to watch Battleship you can watch it but if your brother wants to watch Titanic let him" We were all happy.

So it was a beautiful Monday morning, it was almost Tuesday the day to go the movies. "YAY" we said.

"Yes, its finally Tuesday" we said and we all jumped with excitement. We all had a nice and clean shower and we dressed up looking superb.We started walking down to G.I later on that day to catch a Train ride to Hoyts Cinema at Sylvia Park. So it had got to the point where we were being so impatient and we all ran like the wind up the staircase. But it was better then running up the escalators and tripping up every minute. So we had finally got up to the top with no broken ankles. After all of that it was MOVIE TIME.

(Sigh) I had wished that Wednesday had gone back to Tuesday when we were in the two separate cinema Titanic and BattleShip. But sadly it was Wednesday but it was alright because I was thankful to go to the Movies on Tuesday.

It was a lovely Thursday Morning and I couldn't wait until the school holidays were over, I just wanted to go back to school and see my friends again. "I can't wait to go back to school" I said to myself.

It was Friday and I was so happy, there were two more days to go then school will be back on ready for Term 2.

Its Saturday morning and I just woke up and the time was almost 10.00 AM because I stayed up until 11.00PM at night watching Victorious, iCarly and Big Time Rush. But I woke up from a very comfortable sleep.

"SUNDAY" I said in happiness, It was the last day of the school holiday and I was so happy. School was going to be the next day, but Sunday felt like a really small day. I couldn't wait until the next day because of school. I felt so bored and exhausted on Sunday but the thing was that the school holidays were finally going to be over,
I couldn't wait to see my friends the next day, but lastly I had a really cool and awesome holiday, and I wish to have another exciting holiday again.

My Goals for Term 2

My Goals for Term 2 is to: 

My goal for reading is for me to get better at making Inferences. 

My goal for maths is to understand Multiplication and to get better at it so it can lead me to a good future. 

My Goal for Writing is to improve on my Tensing and my Grammar. 

My last goal for term 2 is to ignore people who loaf around and keep working. 

My first goal is to stay on task and also to stay focused on my work until it is finished. 

                            I wish to achieve both my Goals at the end of Term 2.