My E - Asttle Writing Results

Zheiyna

Personally I think that being a Good Friend means supporting not just your friends, but also helping the people who you don't really get along with.  Because that is what being a good friend is all about.  It means giving them the motivation, when they start to give up on themselves, It means being there for them when they are in need of you, when they are struggling, or even if they just need someone to talk.

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I'd say that being someones "Good Friend" would straight away tell me that I am being believed in, that I have someones trust.  To me it feels really good being someone's friend,  it makes me feel good even if all I do is help people.  It also makes me have great pleasure on myself.  It tells me that I am being needed and that people know that I exist,  and everyone wants to know that they exist.

There are good friends all over the world,  in our country and in our communities.  There's good friends left, right & centre.  It is just a matter or choosing your friends wisely and carefully.  Because I have come across people who look all nice in the outside, but then in the future I then realise that I have made a bad decision, about who I have become friends with.  That is why I never forget the saying "Looks can be deceiving."  However  friends are friends and nobody's perfect.

But what I don't get, is that if there are good people as in good friends all over the world, and in our countries and communities.  Why is there wars and dramas happening every week? every second infact every minute of the day.  Why is it that people can't just get along and accept people for what they do or who they are ?  I guess it's just that people are caught up in the wrong crowd,  and don't have good friends to tell them what good thing to do instead of doing the opposite, and creating a big fuss about it.  Good friends a needed everywhere,  and I am lucky to be a good friend and to also HAVE good friends.  But the world isn't perfect and it will never change, I guess that if the world had a choice there wouldn't be no wars and dramas happening.  Its totally up to the people in it, to be good friends to each other and help people think of the positive side to everything and not the negative.

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I am happy that I have good friends who will help and support me when I am in need of their help,  and I am also glad that am able to help them.  

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This is my results from my Results

from my E - Asttle Writing test about Good Friends.

Term 1

Overall	Ideas	Structure	Organisation	Vocabulary	Sentence	Punctuation	Spelling
4B	4A	5B	3B	3A	3A	3P	4P
4B	R.5	R.5	R.4	R.4	R.4	R.4	R.5

{ Below is my Goals }

{ My Goals for Writing }

Ideas	I am happy with my result on Ideas, so I will focus on the other elements in Writing
Structure	I am also happy with my result on Structure, so I will focus on the other elements in Writing
Organisation	I wish to be 4B in my area of Organisation.
Vocabulary	With my Vocabulary I want to be a 4B.  So I will need to practise using words form 1 & 2 students should be using.  So it should be complex.
Sentence	With my Sentence Structure, I want to be 4B, so I need to practise using complex, simple and compound sentences.  In my Writing so that it’ll be a form 2 piece of writing.
Punctuation	With Punctuation, I am happy with. But I will need to keep practising putting my punctuation in the right places.
Spelling	I am happy with my Spelling.  But I will need to improve.