This is My Milk presentation, that I have presented to my Learning Hub.
I felt really good about the work that I have presented.
I was happy to get a lot of compliments in return.
I was also really pleased to hear that people have learnt from it.
I am happy with my result on Ideas, so I will focus on the other elements in Writing
I am also happy with my result on Structure, so I will focus on the other elements in Writing
I wish to be 4B in my area of Organisation.
With my Vocabulary I want to be a 4B. So I will need to practise using words form 1 & 2 students should be using. So it should be complex.
With my Sentence Structure, I want to be 4B, so I need to practise using complex, simple and compound sentences. In my Writing so that it’ll be a form 2 piece of writing.
With Punctuation, I am happy with. But I will need to keep practising putting my punctuation in the right places.
I am happy with my Spelling. But I will need to improve.
Te Atua or Atua (Either way )
Hato Pius Xth
Saint Pius Xth
older brother/other sister
Older brother/older sister